Lucky Star as better Slice-of-life than Hidamari Sketch: The macro v.s. the micro

June 10th, 2008 | Categories: Anime | Tags:

You can thank Pontifus for this. I’ve been sucked headlong into that nether realm otherwise known as Real Life ever since my last post, and while this blog isn’t dying any time soon (not when I’ve just been accepted into 9rules!), university and the lack of internet due to an absence of phone lines can only mean that my internet life, what little there was to it, has been unceremoniously cut short.

In any case, what I want to present here is both simple in concept and difficult to grasp: Lucky Star is slice of life first, and comedy second; no matter how you want to argue it, the chances are high that you’ll never enjoy it unless you approach it from that angle, and there’s no exceptions to that rule. It’s the lens by which LS was made to be seen, and if you’ve difficulty in swallowing my argument at this point, well, you’ll find plenty a spoonful of sugar waiting for you after the jump.


since everyone liked the slice-of-life/comedy spectrum so much, I got Roxas to make another, revised version

First of all, it’s definitely a false dilemma to say that all because there’s pandering (and note here that it isn’t so much character shallowness as it is pandering that’s the issue here) involved, the slice of life factor disappears completely, for they aren’t mutually exclusive, and to make it to seem like it’s an either/or case is misleading. It all goes downhill from here: while up to this point I’d have to say that Pontifus still had a point, from this line onwards it was just like watching a group of Britannian soldiers playing into Lelouch’s request for an honourable battle:

The effectiveness of slice-of-life depends in large part on how recognizable its characters are to us.
How does Lucky Star hold up in that regard? Not so well, I’d say. At long last, let’s take a look at Konata.

With regards to the spectrum, it’s only fair to say that from Manabi Straight onwards, most of the cast in each anime are nigh unrecognisable; an eclectic mix of surreal pandering. Be it a cast of five high-school (but looking very very underage) girls in the distant future or five elementary school girls or four art-school girls right out of the moe catalogue or even a bunch of… gondoliers, there isn’t one of them in the blue spectrum that’s either realistic or not pandering. In other words, fault one, and you’ve got to fault them all for not being as true to life as they should.

It certainly begs the question: Where is the value of slice of life, then? Surely not in the form of a character, that’s for sure. We’ve long established that realism is a rarity in anime; in fact, I’d suspect that the only form of English-speaking anime fans prone to questioning the coloured hair of a cast in a given show would be those of the R1 variety, but the less said about them the better. Here’s a hint: it’s not in how a character’s designed, but how a character behaves; the words coming out of their mouths, do they ring true? Do they behave like I would in a given situation?

This brings me to Hidamari Sketch. It’s an anime well know for its slice of life pedigree; no one debates that, no one has ever debated that, and even after I’m done with this post, I suspect that no one will ever debate it again, not in such a manner at any rate. What I’m about to tell you now, however, is that HS isn’t as slice of life as you thought it was. LS is all of that, and more. How so? To do that, we’ve got to reverse-engineer it, deconstructing slice of life in the process, and how it entertains us with tales of everyday living to great effect.

HS, for all purposes, was spectacular. Take this order of events for example:

  1. Yuno internalises A.
  2. Miyako internalises B.
  3. Yuno and Miyako talk about C with their understood meaning of A and B respectively.
  4. Hilarity/realism ensues when they realise that they’re not on the same frequency.

Simple? Quite. Realistic? Very. I’ve lost count of how many times everyday conversation treads along those lines; a common, innocent error in conversation that makes us aware of our imperfections as people; how we fail to get simple meaning across to another person despite how they might be an arm’s length away. We revel in HS and its ilk and laugh at it, but not because it’s funny; when I am laughing at how Yuno, Miyako, and sometimes Sae internalise their thoughts before bringing them together in an explosive conversation, I am not laughing at them per se; rather, I am laughing at myself, having gone through the same experiences as they have.


this picture is pandering as it plays to the desire of Touhou fans for an anime

This is the crux of slice of life — to mirror the viewer’s reality as he or she knows it, albeit through a slightly more polished veneer, and with all the familiarity of an inside joke. This isn’t done through how a character looks, but what a character does. To have that moment, or moments of truth where I see myself reflected in a character’s thoughts, hopes, fears, or actions, and to be able to recognise that I see the reflection — that’s what slice of life’s all about.

All good (and bad, to some extent) anime is necessarily reactive; that is to say, we have a reaction towards whatever is being presented, be it emotional or intellectual. Slice of life differs in that it isn’t so much reaction as it is reflection we’re looking for, and of this HS provides in spades. In the span of a single cour and two OVA episodes, we’re treated to many an everyman conversation, predicament, or situation, and at the end of it all, we’re sated, having gorged ourself on a steady diet of life through rose-tinted glasses.

Is the same reflective nature present in LS? I’d have to say yes, there is, and the quality of it is what matters, not the quantity. Of quantity HS has by the truckload, and if we’re going to debate about exactly how many slice of life moments each show has, then HS wins hands down, no contest. It’s definitely got several weaknesses, though, one of which being that its modus operandi is painfully formulaic to anyone slightly familiar with the series. Take this for instance:

  1. Yuno wakes up.
  2. Theme/mood/motif of the day is established.
  3. This theme/mood/motif is repeated throughout the day.
  4. Yuno’s day begins.
  5. Conversation happens.
  6. Things happen.
  7. Slice of life moment.
  8. Repeat #5, #6, and #7 for the duration of the episode, in any order.
  9. The only exception to #8 would be that occasionally, surreal things happen.
  10. At some point or various points throughout the day the daily theme/mood/motif is repeated, occasionally with irony, but always bringing Yuno back full circle.
  11. Yuno retires, her day ends.
  12. Yuno reflects aloud in the bathtub.

How’s that for repetitive? “But that’s how life works!”, you say. I know, I know. The truth is that with all slice of life stories the focus lies on the micro rather than the macro. It’s life under the microscope; a boring, everyday life just like the one we all face at some point or another in our lives, but a boring life with a difference — the difference here being that on the screen, under intense scrutiny, life begins to take on that moment of truth and beauty, and suddenly living becomes a lot more bearable, even meaningful due to what we’ve seen.

The problem with the micro focus commonly attributed to slice of life is that it tends to take on a farcical pattern, a monotonous repetition that isn’t any less pandering than Kanokon or To Love Ru. Slice of life porn? Yes, we can! In a sense this is no more different than a Key work or any of its derivatives that seek to make you cry; there’s just a different set of aesthetics involved, and as the incredibly biased humans we are, we’ve made harem fanservice out to be this heinous crime while singing praises of slice of life fanservice to everyone who’ll listen.

Let’s face it, slice of life as we know it is just as inherently paint-by-numbers as any harem flick out there. Herein lies the difference, though — while harem more often than not uses fanservice as an end unto itself, slice of life uses its own brand of fanservice as a means to an end; the portrayal of numerous familiar conversations, identifiable mannerisms, and a cyclical task of living gently guides us to a corner to make us sit down and think, or, assuming we can’t spare the mental faculties for that act, then just plain sit until we’re a little more removed from our daily hustle and bustle. No one ever watches slice of life in a hurry.


this picture isn’t pandering as it articulates the sexual tension subtext present in Konata’s character

I see many slice of life shows, those further along the blue spectrum in particular, as possessing what I call “fanservice” due to how it just immerses you in the monotony of life until you’re awash in a sea of drudgery; it’s a very pretty and coherent drudgery, to be certain, and this immersion doesn’t require finesse so much as it does minor variation. Kanon (the musical piece, not the anime) makes for a great analogy in lieu of a proper explanation; the same piece, played over and over again with minor variations each time.

This is where LS steps in and breaks the mould through its macro, rather than micro focus that bears more than a passing resemblance to Martin’s zoom lens love v.s. wide-angle romance theory. I’m consciously tarring many a show with the same brush by saying this, but why bother praising what’s been done so many times before under a different name? I’m sure there’s only so many episodes of Aria one can take. Rhetorical statement aside, however, the moments in conventional slice of life can sometimes reek of as much artificiality as a doe-eyed girl stricken with Hereditary Hysterical Herpes does, and LS makes the transition process from moment to moment infinitely more natural.

How does it do so? By weaving in its slice of life moments quietly, never drowning the viewer in more than it should. Through a series of (supposedly boring and pointless) conversations the foundation for the characters are laid, brick by brick. When the moment finally arrives, it’s not the last tile on the roof being laid in place so much as it is it applying cement that glues each brick together, and when it’s all over and done the impact packs a punch unlike anything seen before.

Konata and the afterglow of a concert; fireworks at a festival; Kagami, the school trip, and the pseudo-confession; the Hiiragi sisters have a fight; the Izumis reminisce about Kanata — all of these are breathtaking, even heartbreaking moments that HS never comes close to, for its micro focus prevents it from achieving greatness; familiarity breeds contempt, and what’s a little piece of slice of life when you’ve got five more due in the next 20 minutes? In LS, however, these scenes are far and few in-between, and when we see them they confirm what we otherwise wouldn’t usually know, drawing us closer to the characters as a result.

The effect this has on the viewer is like an epic 10 minute post-rock song. Post-rock employs a structure distinctly different from your conventional music genre in that there can be continuous climaxes throughout the song, or even one grand finale to cap it off after layers of instruments have been peeled back minute by minute, and this latter example is what LS stands for; an intricate process of balancing humour with slice of life that pays off at the very end by having it come together as a cohesive whole.

Contrary to what Pontius thinks about Konata (and her misunderstood father by extension) being mere pandering to otaku and nothing else, I’d have to say that he’s missed the point by a mile. Surely it doesn’t matter what characters start out as so much as what they are when the show ends? Do we hold Simon to being a wimpy digger for the entirety of the show? No, we don’t, but that’s because his development as a character is both internal and external — we see him grow both mentally and physically, and as they occur in tandem, no one will ever accuse him of being static.

The same goes for Konata. As the 24th episode draws to a close, do I think of her as just the same bubbly girl she was back in the pilot, complete with six-minute conversation of chocolate cornets? No. From the many bits of small talk that I’ve witnessed her being party to, she’s more than the sum of her parts. She grows in our eyes; not physically or mentally, as Simon does, but a different type of growth marked by us knowing more about her than we have at the beginning; definitely appropriate considering the genre. It’s not a whole lot, but when you scale it down and take into consideration the fact that the same could be said of real life acquaintances, then things start to make a lot more sense, fast.


this picture is pandering as it caters to Tomoya fans who want to see him in twintails

On revisiting Pontius’ post, I can now note somewhat wryly, emphasis mine, that

But slice-of-life shows have to earn that label somehow. The setting doesn’t have to demonstrate flawless Earth science and sociology, but the characters should at least resemble Earthlings in more ways than not, or else the show becomes a slice of something that isn’t recognizably human life. If Lucky Star were only comedy, it might be able to get away with Sayonara Zetsubou-sensei’s absurdism — but it isn’t, so it can’t.

this is probably the only part of his post that I can agree with, for what’s not to love? Each and every character is more than just their perceived archetype, for they’ve got their ups and downs, that bright spark of vivid humanity that allows me to identify with them with ease. Whether it’s an achievement or an oversight; a stray thought or purposeful intent; being caught up in the action or wrapped in a moment of solitude — I’ve been there. To say that it’s a show with a distinctly otaku flavour is true, but LS doesn’t stop there, and neither should you, for it’d be like eating all of the icing on a cake but stopping short of eating the cake itself.

In slice of life it isn’t so much what a character seems to be as it is what a character does. What a character feels, says, thinks, or does — is that true? Does it resonate within? Appearances are but a mirage in this medium, and to whine and be anal, to nitpick and fuss about the trappings of a character while failing to see what he or she’s really made of is akin to missing the forest for the trees. It’s a tragic mistake if I ever saw one, and with any luck, this post will go a long way towards correcting that popular misconception.

  1. June 10th, 2008 at 20:22
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    My limited intellect permits me only to understand the second last paragraph.

  2. June 10th, 2008 at 20:57
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    Oh lols, The Sojourner

    I read everything and I can understand where you’re coming from, Owen! Even though I don’t really dig slice-of-life anime (I’ve never even seen Lucky Star or Hidamari Sketch before), I guess I really do laugh when characters do things that I sometimes, occasionally, do as well. I think Minami-ke is the only slice-of-life comedy I’ve actually finished watching, and there wasn’t really any moment that a character reminded me of myself, but more of what my friends do or have done. I just wish I can find time to actually watch LS and HS to understand more of what you’re talking about.

    The only reason why I don’t really like slice-of-life is mainly because I’m more into unrealism, and the same goes with reading books. But I also think that the more realistic characters are and the more you can relate to them, the more you love them and the same probably goes with anime as well.

  3. June 10th, 2008 at 22:07
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    After all this I’m still hesitant to be conclusive about the ‘nature of genres’. I think I understand your argument, but the spectrum still insinuates a weird twitching in my body. Is it a gradient? That is are SoL and Comedy one in the same just in different forms? Or is this relying on the farce of the heterogeneity of the syntagm – the fact that the “spectrum” is just a blog of paradigmatic, homogeneous legos stacked on top one another. Whichever method we prefer, well, I hadn’t thought of the repercussions of those two models, but the whole homogenizing nature of “block genres” fails to recognize how we “classify” anime in such a gradient-like manner. Am I just restating your own chart? Perhaps, but can this agree with how things are inherently “better?” Would “better” then entail an entirely separate genre – to keep up with our classificatory processes? You established what exactly a SoL was (you did right? I forget), and I don’t know where the hell this comment is going.

  4. June 10th, 2008 at 23:31
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    As I commented in the previous post, I disagree with you on the merits of the show, not your analytical process. There’s nothing controversial about your dissection of the slice-of-life genre. However, I can’t agree with the way you apply your slice-of-life analysis to Lucky Star.

    Konata is still the same girl from episode 1. Isn’t that’s the basis for nearly every punchline concerning her personality? Konata’s being lazy again…oh, that Konata, same ol’ Konata. By the end if you feel differently about her, it’s because you’ve changed, not her. Yes, we know more about her…I’d certainly hope so after 24 episodes.

    As for your paragraph about the different slice-of-life scenes, most of those are buildups to punchlines. They go to the fireworks festival – and get attacked by flies. They go on a school trip – and get attacked by goats. What’s her face gets a letter, touching moments ensue – and that’s all to set you up for an ugly guy who isn’t interested in her. This is more like the harem fanservice you try to distinguish earlier in the post. Slipping and falling = slice of life. Slipping and falling into that hot girl next door = harem. Take an example from Lucky Star. Falling asleep on the train = slice-of-life. Falling asleep on the train and explicitly turning it into the basis for a joke = comedy. There is an “end,” and that end is comedy (or at least attempted comedy).

    Lucky Star is primarily a comedy. Yes, there are slice-of-life moments. Yes, there is character development. Yes, you could definitely enjoy the show more if you approached it as a slice-of-life instead of a comedy. But it’s first and foremost a comedy. Most of the slice-of-life moments are means to a comedic end.

    Ultimately, my point isn’t that you can’t enjoy Lucky Star’s slice-of-lice, but that you could call any anime a slice-of-life, even harem anime like Love Hina (bringing up BLATANT fanservice anime like Kanokon and To Love Ru was cheap). Then you could use the slice-of-life as an excuse, or even a justification, for the rest of the show’s shortcomings.

    “El Cazador de la Bruja had crappy action.” No you moron, you were supposed to look at it as a slice-of-life.

    “Kure-nai has a crappy plot.” Don’t think so dumbass. Slice-of-life all the way.

    Let’s not grow accustomed to playing the slice-of-life card to hush legitimate criticism of a show’s flaws.

  5. June 11th, 2008 at 01:30
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    Man… Baka-Raptor kinda said what I wanted to say… even before reading your post. :P And it’s part of why I at least think that LS and HS should at least switch, if not pushing LS further up the comedy portion of the line (and what exactly are the qualities that define that line exactly? I know we talked about this on IRC and elsewhere, but I’m still kinda confused. Especially by your placing of Manabi there. :D). But you’re baiting me to respond, even if that wasn’t your intention. :P

    I still just might have to basically repeat what he said (AND MORE) post wise. I do need to chew on your definition of “macro vs. micro” slice-o-life wise for a bit.

  6. June 11th, 2008 at 01:43
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    Wow, you’ve just unleashed a month’s worth of pent-up writer’s frustration, haven’t you? :P It’s good to see you back though, even temporarily. Cheers for the trackback too, although like TheBigN I’ll have to mull over how relevant it is to this.

    The slice of life label is yet another one of those misused genre definitions – it’s now brought out kicking and screaming without much thought into what it meant to begin with. Funny how that often happens.

    For me it defines a story whose content comprises of situations and events that viewers can directly relate to, the polar opposite of most other entertainment, which is intentionally giving us an escape from real life. Unfortunately some people use ’slice of life’ to describe a lack of events and situations in a story, in the same way that using the word dark describes lack of light or cold describes lack of warmth. ‘Slice of life’ is merely differentiating a story of ‘ordinary-ness’ from everything else, and wasn’t originally meant to be synoymous with ‘uneventful’ per se.

    If you want to describe, say, Aria, you’re better of using ‘iyashikei’ because while it is indeed a portrayal of the everyday, the connotations that follow ’slice of life’ around these days are better off in the company of ‘realistic fiction’ because Aria is (intentionally) quite far-removed from ordinary life as we know it and has quite a stong escapism element to it. Anyhow, I’ll elaborate on that in my Aria posts, which I’ll have get published pretty sharpish since Omo’s efforts are about to put mine to shame…

  7. June 11th, 2008 at 21:50
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    POSTING IN AN EPIC BLISSMO COMMENT THREAD

    Lelangir: SoL and comedy have been around for a long time, and I thought it apt to lump them together. That’s all. I have a feeling that you overthought this on the scale of Lelouch in one of the picture/sound dramas, but I haven’t seen that one yet.

    Martin: Isn’t iyashikei v.s. slice-of-life merely an issue of semantics, like ero/H v.s. hentai?

    In any case, SoL is a qualitative process — i.e. we might not even have the same definition in mind to begin with! There’s the possibility that we might be talking about the same elephant here.

    N: Does the fact that Manabi has a coherent plot to it automatically exclude it from the pantheon of SoL? :D

    Baka Raptor: So you’re saying that the “We love Kagamein” purikura was just noise in an extremely long setup for two punchlines, one of which wasn’t even a punchline to begin with? Or that Konata’s care for Kagami (read: character development) isn’t obvious in the way she notices Kagami’s mood change and goes out of her way to care for her? You might have missed out on that one the first time.

    I’m sure the concert afterglow was meant to elicit laughs, as was the Kanata backstory. Right. El Cazador sucked from the very first episode, and sucked till the very end, if what I’ve heard is true. Kurenai is established awesome — are you trying to drag out examples from your nether regions, or is that a strawman I see?

    In my opinion, what this looks like to me is that you can’t seem to accept that I actually see LS with these eyes, and you’re brushing my praise off as “justification” for a “bad anime”. No one’s playing the SoL card all the time here, and not even often at that — have I done this with any other anime? No. Will there ever be such an anime? I sincerely doubt it. Beware the slippery slope.

    For all those of you who care, I’ll write yet another post explaining more stuff. Eventually. Think of it as the DVD bonus material, or something.

  8. June 12th, 2008 at 01:18
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    I accept that you like Lucky Star. My criticism of your post is that you’re fishing for justifications that are both questionable and unnecessary. If all you did was praise the character development, I’d have no problems. I only take issue with your liberal characterization of Lucky Star as a slice-of-life anime. Consider your explanation for why its slice-of-life moments work:

    “[W]eaving in its slice of life moments quietly, never drowning the viewer in more than it should.”

    You can say that about any show that isn’t obviously slice-of-life, even Kanokon, and definitely To Love Ru. Does that make To Love Ru a slice-of-life anime? If you’ve seen Golden Boy, you know it has a lot of touching moments. Is that a slice-of-life anime too? Are slice-of-life moments enough to make a slice-of-life anime? What isn’t a slice-of-life anime? You never rebutted my criticism of your means-ends theory.

    I also think you’re losing track of quality, quantity, and proportion at different parts of this post. The initial graph seems to be about proportion. Later you claim that Lucky Star has fewer but better slice-of-life moments than Hidamari Sketch. Is that consistent with your chart? If so, is the chart about quality/effectiveness? In that case, does the comedy end of the spectrum even belong there? Perhaps a 2D graph with slice-of-life and comedy as independent axes would better suit your argument.

    There’s a reason I said that most scenes are buildups to punchlines. Some aren’t, as you triumphantly pointed out. Most are.

    I bring up Kure-nai and El Cazador as legitimate examples of fans sweeping a shows’ flaws under the slice-of-life carpet. You’re free to enjoy the shows; just don’t make irrelevant excuses for their shortcomings.

  9. June 12th, 2008 at 02:29
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    While I understood a number of your points, such as how actions, not designs are the defining element in what forms a character and whatnot, the micro/macro discussion completely threw me off. I blame my lack of intellectual capability for this and I apologize for not being able to leave a more intelligible comment.

  10. June 12th, 2008 at 05:03

    @Owen: I think slice of life and iyashikei are two different things but there’s a still often some overlap in terms of how the writers of each go about their work so confusing the two is understandable. They can both describe the same show, but not always. They are two different and separate concepts, in my head at least.

    Slice of life describes the structure of the story, and its setting; iyashikei is more concerned with the effect it has on the viewer. I could be absolutely wrong on this, mind.

    A fuller explanation is in the works, promise! ^_^

  11. June 12th, 2008 at 05:13

    The language of this post is less argument, more paean. I can’t tell whether you’re right or not.

  12. June 12th, 2008 at 14:04

    @Owen:

    You don’t know how many times I had to re-read the article to remember what you wrote!

  13. June 13th, 2008 at 04:51

    “I’m sure there’s only so many episodes of Aria one can take”

    Not if your name is Jeffery A. Lawson.

    I think this exercise is still silly–one man’s slice-of-life is another man’s comedy. There’s nothing new to see here. I would go as far as to say that you are probably even wrong about perceived notions of familiarity. To me, slice-of-life is about presentation (mostly as a narrative device), and not content. You can have a slice of life show about living on the planet Xeon, in the Braxxis quadrant of Galaxy Mu, and working in a Dilletinum factory which powers sex-bots that services all nine orifices of the Xeonian reproductive biology. The main character can even be this muscle-ripped alien guy who dances ballet for a hobby, talking waffo-lu (the popular spectator sport of the locals) with his friends. There won’t be any inside joke because waffo-lu vocabulary and rules are not like anything we do on Earth, but it still can be a slice of life 100%.

  14. June 13th, 2008 at 11:42

    My quick thoughts, Hidamari Sketch is simpler slice-of-life, you don’t need too much Japanese culture background or deep otaku knowledge to get the jokes.

  15. June 13th, 2008 at 16:40

    Like watching a group of Britannian soldiers playing into Lelouch’s request for honorable battle? Oh snap. Even I’m not dumb enough to do what that jackass says.

    I’ll just hit a few points that caught my attention, so as not to totally flood the comments thread here (I’ll only flood it partially, in other words).

    First of all, it’s definitely a false dilemma to say that all because there’s pandering (and note here that it isn’t so much character shallowness as it is pandering that’s the issue here) involved, the slice of life factor disappears completely, for they aren’t mutually exclusive, and to make it to seem like it’s an either/or case is misleading.

    Characters clearly designed to please fans in shallow ways — that is, invoking reactions of “aww, how cute” or “hey, nice tits” or “wow, I wish I owned that many PVC figures” rather than “hmm, this is a complex character to whom I can relate on several levels, and who I can justifiably apply to the human condition” — are themselves shallow. In that sense, fan-pandering and slice-of-life are mutually exclusive. I define fan-pandering as a shallow process, separate from more “legitimate” characterization (though I used the word more generally toward the end of my own article, which was, perhaps, a mistake).

    Be it a cast of five high-school (but looking very very underage) girls in the distant future or five elementary school girls or four art-school girls right out of the moe catalogue or even a bunch of… gondoliers, there isn’t one of them in the blue spectrum that’s either realistic or not pandering.

    I can’t say much about this, as the only show in your blue spectrum with which I have experience is Lucky Star, but there are certainly shows where the characters aren’t 100% shallow pandering and act like people with their general personalities might act, given their situations (and the situations can be entirely crazy and off-the-wall, as long as the characters act like people). Bamboo Blade is better slice-of-life than Lucky Star, in this sense.

    Here’s a hint: it’s not in how a character’s designed, but how a character behaves; the words coming out of their mouths, do they ring true? Do they behave like I would in a given situation?

    Design begets behavior, and their behavior is precisely why the characters in Lucky Star aren’t really realistic enough for it to be legitimate slice-of-life, as far as I’m concerned. It all comes across as too carefully orchestrated, too intentional, too bent toward igniting very basic desires of fandom — and, I mean, it’s a story, so it was obviously carefully orchestrated by a writer, but it shouldn’t feel like it was.

    This is the crux of slice of life — to mirror the viewer’s reality as he or she knows it, albeit through a slightly more polished veneer, and with all the familiarity of an inside joke. This isn’t done through how a character looks, but what a character does.

    Characterization is the sum of everything that makes up a character. Actions are the bulk of it, but you can’t write everything else off, especially in as visual and aural a medium as animation.

    The truth is that with all slice of life stories the focus lies on the micro rather than the macro. It’s life under the microscope; a boring, everyday life just like the one we all face at some point or another in our lives, but a boring life with a difference — the difference here being that on the screen, under intense scrutiny, life begins to take on that moment of truth and beauty, and suddenly living becomes a lot more bearable, even meaningful due to what we’ve seen.

    No complaints here. I just like the way you’ve worded this passage.

    The problem with the micro focus commonly attributed to slice of life is that it tends to take on a farcical pattern, a monotonous repetition that isn’t any less pandering than Kanokon or To Love Ru.

    But like anything else, it doesn’t have to. There are ways of keeping even the most tired concepts refreshing. In storytelling, there’s no such thing as the story that hasn’t been told before; originality is a matter of putting a new spin on something. Slice-of-life is no exception, but I don’t think Lucky Star really brings anything mind-blowing to the table.

    …why bother praising what’s been done so many times before under a different name?

    Which is exactly why I don’t like Lucky Star that much.

    How does it do so? By weaving in its slice of life moments quietly, never drowning the viewer in more than it should. Through a series of (supposedly boring and pointless) conversations the foundation for the characters are laid, brick by brick. When the moment finally arrives, it’s not the last tile on the roof being laid in place so much as it is it applying cement that glues each brick together, and when it’s all over and done the impact packs a punch unlike anything seen before.

    Konata and the afterglow of a concert; fireworks at a festival; Kagami, the school trip, and the pseudo-confession; the Hiiragi sisters have a fight; the Izumis reminisce about Kanata — all of these are breathtaking, even heartbreaking moments that HS never comes close to, for its micro focus prevents it from achieving greatness; familiarity breeds contempt, and what’s a little piece of slice of life when you’ve got five more due in the next 20 minutes? In LS, however, these scenes are far and few in-between, and when we see them they confirm what we otherwise wouldn’t usually know, drawing us closer to the characters as a result.

    I’m going to agree with Baka-Raptor on this one (though I don’t care whether Lucky Star is primarily comedy or primarily slice-of-life, as it didn’t do a good job in either case). To him, you responded: “So you’re saying that the ‘We love Kagamein’ purikura was just noise in an extremely long setup for two punchlines, one of which wasn’t even a punchline to begin with? Or that Konata’s care for Kagami (read: character development) isn’t obvious in the way she notices Kagami’s mood change and goes out of her way to care for her?” That’s precisely what I’m saying — and there was no character development to speak of in Lucky Star, really; I didn’t get the impression that the things characters did at the end couldn’t realistically have taken place at the very beginning.

    I’ll admit that the episode with the whole Kanata scene was alright, but, no matter how much you stress the importance of quality over quantity, a mere few such scenes aren’t enough to make a show good slice-of-life, just like a show that sucks for the majority of its run and picks up in the last three or four episodes still isn’t a good show (just an example; Lucky Star isn’t like that, as it’s just mediocre all the way through).

    As the 24th episode draws to a close, do I think of her as just the same bubbly girl she was back in the pilot, complete with six-minute conversation of chocolate cornets?

    I certainly do. It’s the same Konata responding to different situations.

    She grows in our eyes; not physically or mentally, as Simon does, but a different type of growth marked by us knowing more about her than we have at the beginning; definitely appropriate considering the genre.

    One of my favorite novels is Ulysses, whose characters are handled the same way — they don’t change, that is, except in that we learn more about them. But Ulysses takes place over the course of a single day, and its central character is a middle-aged man; there isn’t much room for change no matter how you look at it. In Lucky Star, we’ve got high school girls experiencing their late teenage years — of course they should be changing; they should be changing a great deal, and not just in how we perceive them. Mere explication isn’t enough. I agree that Lucky Star’s character development amounts to exactly what you’ve pointed out here, and I’ll cite that as one of the ways in which the show falters.

    …when you scale it down and take into consideration the fact that the same could be said of real life acquaintances, then things start to make a lot more sense, fast.

    Eh, not really. Real-life acquaintances also change as people, not just in our eyes, and the characters in Lucky Star don’t do that so much.

    Each and every character is more than just their perceived archetype, for they’ve got their ups and downs, that bright spark of vivid humanity…

    As far as I could tell, the characters rarely went beyond their archetypes, and, again, rarely isn’t often enough. Vivid humanity was certainly something the show lacked.

    …it’d be like eating all of the icing on a cake but stopping short of eating the cake itself.

    My point, though, is that Lucky Star is all icing and no cake.

    Appearances are but a mirage in this medium, and to whine and be anal, to nitpick and fuss about the trappings of a character while failing to see what he or she’s really made of is akin to missing the forest for the trees.

    Actually, to whine and be anal, to nitpick and fuss about the trappings of a character is to be an active viewer. Characters are the sums of their parts, their parts including what they seem to be on the surface, so we can’t write that off as unimportant. Besides, in Lucky Star, there wasn’t a whole lot beneath the surface, so what the show throws at us is pretty much what we’ve got to go on. Also remember that forests are made up of trees, and when enough of those trees are cut down, it isn’t a forest anymore.

    Now, it’s entirely possible that I just missed something while watching Lucky Star. Perhaps I just wasn’t in the mood for that kind of thing at the time. Maybe if I went back and watched the show again, I’d love it (I doubt it, but it’s happened before). This article also makes clear that you were able to relate to the show much more than I did; maybe Lucky Star is just your show and not mine. Perhaps that’s the nature of slice-of-life, and what we’re doing here is an exercise in irrelevance. I don’t think my line of thought is too off-the-wall, though.

    tl;dr NO U

  16. June 14th, 2008 at 00:22

    Characters clearly designed to please fans in shallow ways — that is, invoking reactions of “aww, how cute” or “hey, nice tits” or “wow, I wish I owned that many PVC figures” rather than “hmm, this is a complex character to whom I can relate on several levels, and who I can justifiably apply to the human condition” — are themselves shallow. In that sense, fan-pandering and slice-of-life are mutually exclusive. I define fan-pandering as a shallow process, separate from more “legitimate” characterization (though I used the word more generally toward the end of my own article, which was, perhaps, a mistake).

    Wow, so daring. And wrong.

  17. June 14th, 2008 at 15:16

    Posting in an epic omo troll-mode thread (it’s like nekomimi moodo, only more moe).

    My reply at this point has degenerated into redundant proportions, so I’ll continue the anime philosophy debate (aka Why I Am Right[er than you]™) in another post. Details to follow soon. I have absolutely no idea why, despite 9-10 hours of sleep, my eyes feel shitty after a mere hour or two at the PC. Feel free to leave more comments that I may or may not reply to in aforementioned new post, depending on whether or not it warrants a reply.

    P.S.: I just realised that the reason why I consistently fail at replying coherently and cohesively to comments in a post like this is that there are just too many, and I try to take on all of them, all of the time in a manner not unlike Neo at the Burly Brawl.

    P.P.S.: Yes, these are my readers.

    P.P.P.S.: Just to append onto omo’s comment in an attempt to make him seem less troll, I thought I’d just state the obvious and say that, Kaiji-sque shows aside, all characters in all shows nowadays are clearly designed to please fans. However, it is pretty evident that character depth never has and never will commensurate with character design. Oh look, Yoko’s a busty 14 year-old who gives new meaning to the term “dressing down”, evidently she’s as shallow as the kid’s wading pool now!!

  18. June 14th, 2008 at 15:57

    …all characters in all shows nowadays are clearly designed to please fans.

    Well, yeah, but there’s pleasing fans, and then there’s fan-pandering — two different things, in my mind.

    Oh look, Yoko’s a busty 14 year-old who gives new meaning to the term “dressing down”, evidently she’s as shallow as the kid’s wading pool now!!

    Minus the sarcasm, this is a partly true statement, but that wasn’t the only reason she was shallow.

    Our difference of opinion here is fundamental and probably irreconcilable, due to how downright subjective all this is, but I look forward to your next post — I got into this whole blogging thing as an alternative to forums because I’d rather be told I’m wrong with a 2500-word diatribe than by the usual trollage (see: omo), and I can count on you for that.

  19. June 14th, 2008 at 21:07

    I have absolutely no idea why, despite 9-10 hours of sleep, my eyes feel shitty after a mere hour or two at the PC.

    Two possible reasons: 1. contact lenses. How long do you wear them each day? 2. the pollen count. In my case it’s a combination of the two…I spent several hours yesterday half-blind in one eye. Back on topic…

    I’m getting a bit tired of the circular arguments that pick apart the minutiae and losing sight of the fundamental “I enjoyed/did not enjoy this. (delete as applicable)” since it’s an approach that sucks the fun out of something that’s meant to be entertaining (incidentally, one reason why studying entertainment media at school stops you enjoying it as entertainment). Since the aformentioned hayfever has left me in a really techy mood, I’ll go with agreeing to disagree so we can all talk about other things instead. Like how Frontier has started to get really, really good now…

  20. June 15th, 2008 at 16:52

    @Pontifus:

    I’m jealous. You can write so much.

  21. June 16th, 2008 at 07:08

    I think Pontifus is right in terms of what a blog does. But it doesn’t make him any less wrong. The concept of what slice-of-life is as a narrative device is well-established. To re-coin the phrase to his own ends and then say it’s something else is begging to be pegged by any by-stander with an interest in the subject matter.

    So I’d say he owes Owen a big one for providing a platform to spew his nonsense.

  22. June 16th, 2008 at 14:56

    To re-coin the phrase to his own ends and then say it’s something else is begging to be pegged by any by-stander with an interest in the subject matter.

    It’s not as if I expected to get off lightly, but I wasn’t trying to “re-coin” anything. I’m aware of what the term means, I’m familiar with other media to which it has been applied, and, given my experience, it’s safe to say that Lucky Star’s characters don’t do — for me, mind you; I never presumed to speak for all viewers — what characters in a slice-of-life story should do. If you think I’m trying to be a vocabulary maverick or something, you’ve got me pegged wrong.

    So I’d say omo owes Owen a big one for providing a platform to spew his nonsense.

    Fixed.

    I do feel that I owe Owen “a big one,” in fact — I owe him for taking the time to respond to my writing at such length, when he could’ve brushed it off as below his consideration. After all, and needless to say, he has much more clout in this community than I do.

  23. Kirie
    June 17th, 2008 at 00:21

    Great post, Owen!

    I really don’t understand many of the arguments of the Lucky Star haters.

    1 – moe character art and lolicon pandering. Proceed a paragraph later to explaining how Azumanga Daioh, Hidamari Sketch and Aria are teh pinnacle of good SoL. Just – what? The character design in LS is so – cartoonish, unrealistic, bizarre that it really takes the personalities to establish any connections. I’m sure I’ve read this argument before, many times – I’m sure you can even go a stretch and say that the design of the characters is a parody of the moe genre. Now – explain to me please why nobody uses these standards for the aforementioned three anime that actually /do/ have moe character art?

    2 – otaku pandering. Well… it’s SoL. An otaku’s life, no less. Why /wouldn’t/ she have figurines, or talk about Gundam, or collect shuffle manga just for the sake of collection? Otaku do that irl too. Anything less would make it unrealistic.

    3 – unrealistic. I’m not sure in what reality these people live in. Waking up/going to school/going home/taking a bath is not what highschool kids do every single day. At least, that’s not my life, and I’m the one watching this. How is it believable slice of life if it’s the slice of the life of someone I have absolutely 0 in common with? Aria is about as realistic in terms of female characters as La Corda d’Oro is about its males. Gender perception. As a female Otaku, as someone who can relate in parts to all four of them, and has friends like this… this is how girls act. Losing cell-phones, going to cons, playing ero-games and browsing harems just because it’s an ‘otaku’ thing, collecting random paraphernalia, arguing about random sweets, deciding on the outcome of a mystery series by how many minutes it has left to air, imagining your friends in terms of anime characters… I can relate to that! So many of their conversations and epiphanies, I’ve had them too! That’s what makes Lucky Star such an amazingly good SoL – unlike Hidamari or Aria, it’s /realistic/ to me.

    If I watch SoL, I don’t do it because of the relative merit of its story line and character development – any shounen action series is far better than that. I watch it because I want a reflection of life. Aria and Hidamari don’t reflect anything I recognise, and Azumanga even less. In my eyes, they’re just reflecting what the otaku wants his life to be like, no different from what La Corda d’Oro does for girls.

  24. June 17th, 2008 at 20:49

    You can thank Pontifus for this. I’ve been sucked headlong into that nether realm otherwise known as Real Life ever since my last post, and while this blog isn’t dying any time soon (not when I’ve just been accepted into 9rules!), university and the lack of internet due to an absence of phone lines can only mean that my internet life, what little there was to it, has been unceremoniously cut short.

     
    Didn’t I tell or warn about this? Just as planned.

  25. June 17th, 2008 at 22:10

    Marry me, Kirie. You’re a female otaku after my own heart!

    Martin: Thanks for the tip. I was wondering if it was the protein buildup at work since I’m not sure if I’ve been cleaning my lenses properly… so I tried a different method and I feel less tired now. It could’ve been the general fatigue, but thanks for the tip anyway. Episode 10 was kickass, and a return to form.

    Reply to Pontifus and omo will come later whern I’m not pressed for time. In the meantime, omg get a room you two. Also, Impz is gay. YOUR BIRTH WAS NOT AS PLANNED.

  26. June 18th, 2008 at 02:19

    Sorry Owen, I think you’ve lost it on this one.

    To be honest, I struggled to get past the following line: “Lucky Star is slice of life first, and comedy second; no matter how you want to argue it, the chances are high that you’ll never enjoy it unless you approach it from that angle, and there’s no exceptions to that rule.” You’re already heading down the wrong path with blinkers on and I felt that I was wasting my time by the end of your mammoth post.

    Ignoring that you contradict yourself by saying “the chances are high” and “no exceptions” – especially speaking as someone who enjoyed LS as a comedy – simply stating that “Lucky Star is slice of life first, and comedy second” as if it was a fact is ridiculous. I don’t see anything in your subsequent text which convinces me that you are close to being correct. Go back and read Omo and Baka-Raptor’s comments. They have a much better handle on the subject.

    And Kirie, for goodness sake, just because elements of your life are closer to certain characters or situations in Lucky Star does not make this a slice of life anime.

  27. June 18th, 2008 at 15:19

    Oh shikes, I just realized that the point of this entire article and discussion is to state that Lucky Star is more of slice-of-life than comedy, etc. Sorry, Owen, I think I missed this line:

    Lucky Star is slice of life first, and comedy second; no matter how you want to argue it, the chances are high that you’ll never enjoy it unless you approach it from that angle, and there’s no exceptions to that rule.

    And maybe everything else as well and just wrote shit for the first comment. Myyy baad!! XD

    And yes, so I haven’t passed the first fifteen minutes of the the first episode of LS but I think it’s more of a slice-of-life anyway because it takes parts from from people’s life and pieces together interesting events of an ordinary life, doesn’t it? But I don’t think people would usually talk about how they eat bread for so long either, which is probably more comedy-based but now I’m just thinking high-schoolers in general =.=

    And Kirie, for goodness sake, just because elements of your life are closer to certain characters or situations in Lucky Star does not make this a slice of life anime.

    Doesn’t it? Slice-of-life means taking parts of an “ordinary” person’s life, but then you’d have to go ahead and define “ordinary.”

  28. June 18th, 2008 at 20:44

    @Kirie

    How is it believable slice of life if it’s the slice of the life of someone I have absolutely 0 in common with?

    This would be why I don’t like Lucky Star; given my personal experience, it rings false. And I know that the problem here is almost certainly more with the viewer (i.e. me) than the show, especially considering the number of people for whom it does work. Whatever solid characterization some of you are seeing just didn’t happen for me, so what came through most clearly were the obvious pandering tactics (and it’s not Konata’s being an otaku that panders, it’s that she does so without any repercussions — nerd utopia, I think I called it, which I would argue pretty much doesn’t exist when your nerddom has reached Konata-like proportions).

    You know, I was prepared to like Lucky Star during the first few episodes. By God, a ten-minute conversation about bread or the dentist is something I can relate to. But the direction the show took after the director change seems to have been the right direction for fandom at large and the wrong direction for me. It’s not that I don’t want to enjoy Lucky Star, but it just seems to violate my sensibilities regarding what makes a good story, and I can’t really do anything about that; all I can do is bitch about why I didn’t like Lucky Star for the sake of 1. discourse, 2. finding people who agree with me, and 3. pissing off omo, I guess, but that wasn’t really intentional.

    @lastarial

    I love you. But…

    …just because elements of your life are closer to certain characters or situations in Lucky Star does not make this a slice of life anime.

    …I think it’s entirely possible that Lucky Star can be more slice-of-life for Kirie and Owen, et al., than for, say, you and me. Slice-of-life credential is pretty variable, unless the writer in question is James Joyce (not that I’m supremely biased in Joyce’s favor…nope). I think that Lucky Star does, at least, meet the basic requirement of slice-of-life in its concern for characters over any coherent sort of plot — it just fails in the execution, as far as I’m concerned, but needless to say, plenty of people would disagree.

  29. June 18th, 2008 at 21:18

    If you haven’t seen it, I posted my response to your post here.

    I hope I got your “macro” vs “micro” argument right here. I do think that Lucky Star is more comedic in nature than slice of life in nature, and I don’t think that the SoL moments that the show has are as effective as you think they are. But that’s where the difference in our perspectives are. :3

  30. Derek
    June 20th, 2008 at 06:10

    I guess my question would be… why is there a need to describe Lucky Star as Slice of Life at all?

    Would the fact that it requires elaborate analysis and justification to make that argument suggest that it is, in fact, more on the comedic spectrum?

    And if it is comedy… so what? Is it better if it’s Slice of Life?

    Ultimately, for me, the easiest gauge, for me, is why I watch the show…

    I watch Hidamari Sketch because it is soothing and feels good.

    I watch Lucky Star because it is freaking funny.

  31. June 20th, 2008 at 12:34

    This entire post can be shortened to say “Lucky Star is better slice-of-life than Hidamari Sketch because it has less slice-of-life”. While I understand that the argument is a bit longer than that (lets append: “…therefore, the slice of life in Lucky Star is more effective and thus better”) I can’t help but feel like your argument has no ground to stand on other than a personal need to justify, perhaps, liking Lucky Star more than Hidamari Sketch or even merely an attempt to defend it from Pontifus. The appended statement really only makes the argument “Contrasting genres makes the singular genres involved more effective through the creation of a dichotomy.” which is really only a matter of knowing how to balance elements in a story to make other elements more effective.

    Comedy and slice-of-life are elements that exist in most, if not all, stories, and therefore are always working together or against each other to bring about a new whole, which can often be defined under a completely unrelated genre. Having either of these as a genre must only mean that the focus in the storytelling is either of these elements. Defining slice-of-life as relatable events is somewhat silly — I’d say a more accurate definition would be to say slice-of-life are shows about nothing, or shows that have no real overarching plotline. They are “slices” of the characters lives, and life itself has no overarching plot, though it may exhibit themes. In this respect I think you could say that Lucky Star is indeed more slice-of-life than it is comedy, but in terms of having more “slices” of life than Hidamari Sketch, you prove that wrong in your own argument. Quality is not something that could place it above Hidamari Sketch on the slice-of-life scale when we are talking about the method of storytelling.

    The contrast may make the slice of life moments more effective in Lucky Star, but what does Hidamari Sketch use to make its comedy effective, since its method of storytelling is so much more slice-of-life? The lesser element is made to benefit from the more prevalent element, so in a sense, measuring shows that balance elements differently in terms of only a singular element is somewhat silly, and ends up being largely to do with personal taste. Your argument I feel ends up defeating itself because it doesn’t acknowledge its own terms — that is, your graph tries to say that Lucky Star is more slice-of-life oriented than Hidamari Sketch, when your argument tries to say that it has better slice of life, even though Hidamari Sketch has more.

    EDIT: tl;dr — I shoulda read this first cuz it says pretty much everything I was thinking (except I like Lucky Star better, though I do like both): http://bignanime.wordpress.com/2008/06/12/why-i-think-sat-chan-has-it-wrong-but-i-still-love-her-anyway/

  32. yuki
    July 3rd, 2008 at 01:06

    I like Lucky Star.
    I am japanese girl. so, it looks like my life a little.

    If it knows neither the Japanese culture nor the Otaku culture, it doesn’t often understand.

  33. July 5th, 2008 at 17:00

    Credit me for your colour bars, asshole. >:(

    <3

  34. Tim
    July 25th, 2009 at 05:03

    Wow, you people are serious about anime. Anyways, I admire that and I just wanted to say thank you for writing such an interesting article! Or perhaps something more recognizable – GOOD JOB! *Thumbsup*

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