Developer’s Diaries: A World You May Not Understand

October 25th, 2008 | Categories: Anime, Manga | Tags: , , ,

Daniel, as Britishly modest as ever, seems to be downplaying the ridiculous amount of literature he’s been recommending to me–all of them stellar–in our quest to produce something of value as would be befitting our internet identities. I’m his mutual bitch friend in that regard, no doubt about that. Our yet-to-be-publicly-named-project (for fear of it disappearing the same way things that go bump in the night do when given a name) has been proceeding at an excellent pace, albeit one marred by my digression into things like Mother 3, emulated GBA games, non-unreadable visual novels, acclaimed dead trees, and lots of interesting manga in-between.

It’s certainly true that the best people to collaborate with creatively are those who have tastes very much unlike your own, and Daniel has been steadfast in that regard, with a marked preference for /m/en in /m/achines when yours truly would rather watch something more contemporary. What we do have in common, however, is the shared love for a good story, or a ripping yarn as some quarters might call it. It’s this questioning of the form that we’ve been doing on and off, seemingly philosophical questions like “What makes a good story?” “What makes a bad story, for that matter?” “Why is this story good?”

Which brings me to the point of this post: A comparative study of Blue Drop (manga) and Library War (anime). It is fortunate that the differences between mediums matter little here; having undertaken the task of creating a fictional world from scratch, the burning question that I’ve been asking myself is this–How do I make a world that’s both fantastic and credible at the same time? Having just completed both aforementioned series recently, the answer, as all answers do, naturally revealed itself after prolonged introspection.

I would watch 26 episodes of a Shibasaki spinoff, even if Kasahara wouldn't be too pleased about it.

Library War, for starters, has a world that isn’t so much unbelievable as it is uncredible. Voice acting, after all, shatters the glass ceiling of believability into a million little pieces, and when an anime has a formidable cast with which to work with, Inoue Marina in particular, it isn’t a question of whether or not you believe that the characters believe in the world they live in (or even whether they believe in you who believes in them), but whether you believe that the world they believe in is believable, in that regard.

Wordplay aside, this is what I feel LW’s major weakness happens to be: It’s highly unconvincing in terms of oppression. Sure enough, we’ve the spunky little upstart with a BURNING PASSION for books, a gruff-yet-well-meaning instructor, and various other colourful, sparkly, and lovable characters, but to what point do we feel that they’re being subjugated by The Man, that the purpose of their coming together isn’t merely to let dear Kasahara cry and weep and bawl and become a better faster stronger woman at the end of it all?

Here’s the thing: We don’t. A friend of mine of the I-usually-don’t-watch-much-anime kind that I passed a copy of the show to said, “It’s like the whole library wars is a back drop for this love story. Didn’t you feel that?”, and I couldn’t agree more in that respect–while I certainly admire the way in which Iku managed to get me all teary-eyed (especially at the end, even if it was a copout of a Kanon 2006 ending) whenever she turned on the waterworks and could identify with whatever she was going through, the important things like Censorship and Book Burning and Sarah Palin Would Turn America Into This ultimately didn’t resonate as much as I thought they should have.

Oppression should be depicted with a capital O, and it’s not just oppression per se that we’re looking for when we turn to the fictional, it’s Oppression that we want to see–humanity at an all-time low, at its most whipped, raw, and confined with only vestiges of normalcy remaining. How is that present in LW? Sure, there’s some of that in how Kasahara almost doesn’t manage to obtain her favourite novel, but is that oppression, or an academic exercise in oppression? Is that truly subjugation, or subjugation present for the sake of filling in the blanks?

This goes on and on, and wears especially thin when you consider it in the bigger picture–my suspension of disbelief wasn’t broken at the end of it all, although it was certainly wearing well at the seams. Take for example the so-called “last moments” that the Kyoto Library taskforce exchange right before their last battle with the Media Cleansers; I knew for a fact that none of them would come out of it much worse for the wear (hey, no one died!), so where was the impact in a scene like that, if not inserted for purposes of parody or satire?

I certainly have my misgivings about how well LW was handled in its transition to the screen, but I’m not going to second-guess the process. It works exceedingly well as a drama mainly targeted at girls, but as a dystopia intended for the general populace? Not all that much, I’m afraid. If I wasn’t so in touch with the more lachrymal parts of myself or had a penchant for the underdog with a strong sense of justice, I might have found it overtly melodramatic and/or lacklustre.

Compare this, then, to Blue Drop. While each of them can stand on their own (well, almost; the original goes with Maiorita Tenshi, while  Tenshi no Bokura should be treated as the other side of the same coin), the effect of reading all three manga is essentially holistic in nature, framing a larger picture of the events that take place for both the male and female population respectively.

This panel was not altered for humorous purposes.

Like Daniel, and as a guy who revels in his heterosexuality and manhood, I found Tenshi no Bokura to be the most chilling of them all, if only because of how it divided the characters along clearly visible lines like its predecessor, before deciding that clear division was overrated and proceeding to erase those previously-clear boundaries with fiendish glee. While other manga and anime would be content with asking you “What is real?”, TnB takes it a step further by asking, “What is male? What is female, for that matter?”

It does so by putting a series of theoretical scenarios in front of the reader, and doesn’t stop to harp on it or engage in didactic dialogues that might otherwise ruin this delicate balance. Instead, it forces the reader (the intended audience here male, obviously) to think about sexuality, gender, identity, and how the three sometimes come together in one rather loaded package that most people are wont to unravel casually.

In the short, short span of a single volume, the following issues among others are raised, with few answers to be readily found: Is a girl who once was a guy any less of a girl or any more of a guy? Would having sex with said guy be gay, or merely normal, even if the “girl” still possessed the mind and sexual preference of a guy? Is sexual preference physical or mental? What about guys who dress like girls? Are girls who like girls any less of a girl?

And so on. Crossdressing, transsexuality, homosexuality, and heterosexuality are all given face time, with none of them yielding more clear-cut answers than the last. For instance, the Arume–lesbian aliens with blonde hair and neon blue eyes–are currently bringing about the extinction of humanity due to their programs to condition women to have sex with them, and other women. To paraphrase one of the characters, “It’s unnatural.” But what is this supposed to be? What is unnatural–the act itself, or the Arume’s doing? Is this merely creative expression? Right-wing? Left-wing? Right-wing using left-wing messages? Your guess is as good as mine.

So the oppression portrayed here gets you thinking. Aside from what I’ve previously mentioned, there’s also a pervasive atmosphere of Big Sister that made me squirm in my pants, and not just because of Freud’s theory of males having a fear of castration has some truth to it–it’s because it showed me how fragile the male psyche is in terms of ambiguity, and its presence, whether in terms of having to resort to crossdressing, or being reassigned to another gender, is portrayed as humiliating and degrading for the guys.

The same can’t be said for the girls. In the original Blue Drop–a series of vignettes within the same continuity but different timeframe–the presence of the Arumes are portrayed as romantic with a tragedy slant, questioning the Japanese mentality of atonement and sacrifice for the greater good against a Juliet & Juliet backdrop. The story is girl-friendly, for in no way are the characters distressed or in pain bar the death of their female lovers, and this disparity between narratives becomes obvious; the invasion and the Arume are humanised, even romanticised, and as a result, the enmity between the sexes becomes all the more real for the male readers.

When all’s said and done, it isn’t so much the premise that matters as it is what the premise does for the characters, and if the premise is there for the sake of talking heads, or if it’s there because it can contribute to the story in a meaningful manner. If it’s unconvincing, weak, or ill-researched with a blatant disregard for the obvious, the premise wears thin and the viewer/reader (vieder?) gets distracted. A well-utilised premise, however, will strengthen the story just that much more, and determine whether it becomes a gripping and memorable trip, or a decent but forgettable experience that fades into the backdrop a year or two later.

  1. TP
    October 25th, 2008 at 21:49
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    That’s certainly a good introspection into the art of storytelling. The “science” of storytelling isn’t just about fitting the pieces into place: it’s about making the pieces flow, with great ease.

    I think that in essence, Library Wars was too much of a melodrama anime than people expected it to be. I’ve yet to read the novels that inspired it: the adaptation clearly advertised the story more like a standard Japanese template (sorry for the abused phrase I stole from a certain table-top game) of melodrama, rather than a question of perversion of humanity. It’s like, “sure, people lost their lives previously, but over freedom of expression? There’s supposed to be more than just that.”

    I believed that Library Wars can be potentially provocative, but overall, it’s not really believable in the sense that “the overall persecution of books can lead to loss of humanity,” unlike the series you mentioned.

    The focus, I think, is about humanity, or in essence, the preservation of humanity. To compare LW with BD is to compare the lives of urban New York to the lives of Kabul: totally unrelated, but they share similar urban concepts and stories. Telling a story about New York feels trivial (even if we put in a 911-apocalyptic scenario); a story about Kabul, however, evokes a feeling of endearment and sympathy.

    I must be joking, BTW.

  2. October 25th, 2008 at 21:56
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    Agreed on Library Wars. The very thing that prevented it from being an A-list title was the fact that it was primarily a light character-driven show rather than a serious social commentary one; I thought the slice of life aspect was intended to fill the gaps in between the censorship stuff but in the end it proved to be the reverse. Some people were disappointed by this and felt misled, which was understandable. When I compared the worldview of LW with another one that I think inspired it, Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451, I realised that the anime never had such lofty intentions in the first place. LW is pretty similar to our own world, only with a more extreme laws regarding censorship of books (the effects of which are diluted still further by the humourous tone of the series) while F451 is set in a very futuristic world that looks more like something P K Dick would come up with.

    I don’t know much about Blue Drop I’m afraid, but the scan above gave me a sensation similar to the Battle Royale manga: I reread it two or three times to make sure I actually read it right! I’d go into the gender issues in more detail if I were more familiar with the material so for now will pick up on just the idea of “…it isn’t so much the premise that matters as it is what the premise does for the characters…”, which I take to mean that the characters are the main concern of a story, regardless of everything else.

    A case in point was the time when I placed Brave New World and 1984 side-by-side (in case you think that’s weird, I read and analysed them to help my sister with an A-level English essay). The worldviews and themes are similar but Huxley’s writing struck me as being rather cold and more concerned with concepts, ideas and experimental prose; Orwell’s tale is chilling not just because of the oppressive nature of the worldview he created, but because it focuses so closely on the protagonist(s). The politics and ethics give much food for thought but the narrative closely and unflinchingly follows Smith’s experiences, even through the harrowing torture in the Ministry of Love. That connection to Smith’s character is what makes 1984 more of a gripping read for me.

    Hope that helps you somehow – best of luck to both of you in getting the venture to fruition. I’ll try to get my own side-project back on track so expect some lame excuses and flimsy plans of action to arrive in your inbox later today.

  3. October 25th, 2008 at 22:21
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  4. October 26th, 2008 at 02:25
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    @ Martin : Regarding 1984 and Brave New World, I’d say (and it’s been a while since I read either, so take this with a pinch of salt) that certainly characters are the main concern of modern novel-writing, and 1984 is much more a modern novel than BNW. You only have to glance at a few pages of medieval storytelling or (more to the point) modern science fiction to see that there’re plenty of stories where character takes a back seat to ideas. (Though perhaps that just means you can write a good book with a bad story?)

    I also think that some of Brave New World’s ideas are subtler and (it has turned out) more prescient than those in 1984. I’m sure you’ll get ten opinions, each different from the last, from ten people if you ask them to compare the two, though, since it’s such a common exercise (and not just for A-Level students!)

  5. October 26th, 2008 at 17:29
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    Time and again, I’d look back at Library Wars and re-evaluate my fanaticism over it. Whatever has transpired throughout the course of this series’ run allowed me to broaden my perspective on the series (and other future series which would fall under the “I loved it, but I’m not expecting you to feel the same way” category), and I owe it all to the cynics, skeptics, and the enlightened ones (the ones who see things from an “objective” standpoint) for making me more open-minded about this.

    Sometimes I wonder why I gave it a full mark of 10, but no! I shall remain stubborn and say that this is completely “personal and subjective”. As much as I admit to the weaknesses of LW and how I overlooked whatever flaws it has way back when I was pimping/watching it, having enjoyed the series from start to end and having been able to sympathize with the characters despite the lacking details in the story – the depiction of the Oppression, which, I’m afraid, is not so much tackled in the novel as well, or at least not the way people expect it (do take this with a pinch of salt since I haven’t read the later novels in full blast), I still say it deserves that full mark.

    To sum up my tl;dr comment: Yes, I got sucked into LW and enjoyed the melodramatic and slice-of-life development more than anything, and I was probably fooled into enjoying it, but since I never really cared much about the portrayal of the oppression that’s supposed to be in the series (you can say that the audience personally “filled” those details), I’ll continue to look at this series with rose-colored tinted glasses, overlooking its flaws (despite knowing them). Heh.

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